From something I wrote quite a long time ago, actually ...
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“Acheron! Acheron!” she cried, rushing towards him through
the chaos and din. It was he! She had
finally found him… and then he turned towards her. His eyes were hidden by
his helmet’s visor, but his mouth showed disapproval, distaste, contempt. He
turned away from her and suddenly thrust his sword into a member of Conrad’s
band.
The blood rushed to her head and she stumbled, grasping her
sword, gasping for breath. He has betrayed us, she thought, he has gone over to
the enemy. He is a traitor to us all. She fell against a pillar and felt her
chest burning and swelling with anguish. Her eyes burned, her ears burned, her
hands shook and she dropped her sword with a clang of metal against marble. The
noise enveloped her; she could not breathe, she could not cry, she could not
move …
“Tessa! Tessa!” Conrad shouted, but not one syllable reached
her ears. He called again, “Tessa!” but to no avail. He rushed towards her, through
the crowd, but the traitor Acheron had already reached her; he stood over her,
his sword in hand. She turned her head slowly towards Conrad, unresponsive to
the looming figure in front of her. He lifted his sword and prepared to strike.
With a great crash Conrad leaped in between the two and
drew Acheron’s attention away from the wounded girl. Infuriated, the traitor
vented all his attention on the newcomer. He swung his mighty sword with a
bullish effort, missing Conrad’s neck by an inch. Another lunge, and suddenly
Conrad found himself gasping for breath, dropping to his knees, the blood
running from his forehead like a crimson waterfall.
“Conrad!” Tessa painfully
lifted herself up from the base of the marble column and reached out a hand, as
if, from such a distance, she could pull him off the floor and into safety. There he now lay on his back,
exposed and vulnerable to the whims of the Enemy. The traitor stood above the warrior,
menacingly, as he had only moments before stood over his former sweetheart.
Conrad braced himself for the final stroke; Acheron lifted his sword, but
suddenly he, too, stiffened and paused in midair. With a great moan, he collapsed
to the ground. Tessa had struck.
“For my queen,” she cried. She watched as he let fall his
sword and fell to the ground; one groan, one sigh, and a last breath, and all
was still. She stared, stunned, at the body, still and silent, of the man who
had once promised her his very life's breath. Yes, he had betrayed them all, Arthur, Conrad,
Desmona, herself … and yet …
In an instant she fell to the ground, kneeling next to him,
panting, exhausted, nervous, afraid. She dragged herself to his side and felt the warmth leave his body. Tears flooded her face as she clutched his shoulders and
grasped his helmet to release the head from its cage. He had betrayed them, but
now he was dead; could mercy, on her part, intervene to allow for a more just
reward?
She fumbled with the clasp, her hands sweating and shaking,
and gently pulled off the metal helmet to kiss once more the lips which had so
often spoken true and honest words, but …
She stopped and froze. “Conrad,” she whispered uneasily.
Conrad grunted, pulled himself up, and dragged himself over towards her.
“Tessa, don’t look …”
“But Conrad, it isn’t he.”
Conrad stopped and leaned over to look at the body. “Truly?”
“I am quite sure.” She calmly sat back on her heels and
wiped her face. “His eyes are wrong.” Even through the wounds and sweat and
blood, she saw a stranger’s eyes. “They used to be gentle. Warm. Deep. These
are forceful, but have no strength of character. It is only his armor …” and
her voice trailed off. Her eyes swept the mass of men in the crowded hall,
seeking for the answer to the unspoken question. Where was the real Acheron?
Amazing! Riveting! Exciting! I WANT MORE!!! PLEASE!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks :D I'll see if I can get some other bits of it in readable condition. Lots of it is done, but the done stuff is all plot exposition and I don't want to give everything away if I ever decide to publish it! So we'll see what I can dig up ...
ReplyDeleteWow! I really like the names... but the other stuff is cool, too! (I assume this was from the same story that has the part in the cave that I then stole and made my own?) :)
ReplyDeleteYes, same story :D THIEF!
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